Thanks so much for the insight into what drives you. 'Nobody told me to clean my room' is genius but I can't 100% advocate for removing 'Kept the door locked; stayed in my room' although I'm ALMOST inclined to.... That's tough! Maybe just re-record it as the guitar version with the original lyric since you already have the other version from Tiny Desk?
Thanks CK! My thoughts exactly. “Nobody…” fits like a glove rhythmically and just sounds good. But “Kept…” sets the scene. Hard choice but may just keep flip-flopping until one sticks!
Thanks so much for the insight into what drives you. 'Nobody told me to clean my room' is genius but I can't 100% advocate for removing 'Kept the door locked; stayed in my room' although I'm ALMOST inclined to.... That's tough! Maybe just re-record it as the guitar version with the original lyric since you already have the other version from Tiny Desk?
Thanks CK! My thoughts exactly. “Nobody…” fits like a glove rhythmically and just sounds good. But “Kept…” sets the scene. Hard choice but may just keep flip-flopping until one sticks!